Gedichten check: Feeling alone
27-02-15 19:13
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Seren Berichten: 49 |
I'm just a kid feeling alone How can I survive on my own frightened by everything I 've been through I couldn't imagine a world without you I should have been a friend Us, till the end But I lost myself Couldn't look to the mirror on the self Everytime the mirror turned black There was no reflection back Tips, comments? |
08-03-15 15:15
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nayra20 Berichten: 4 |
Beautifull! Ik heb geen toevoegingen omdat hij al prachtig is. |
10-03-15 16:57
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Indolady Berichten: 1 |
Heel mooi! |
12-03-15 18:59
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Verwijderde gebruiker Berichten: 322 |
mooi! |
Naar boven |