Gedichten check: take me back to yesterday
17-11-16 00:27
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nanook Berichten: 5 |
yesterday it was fine yesterday it was oke to live, to hope, to be yourself but now we're just sorted on a shelf yesterday I could run, jump, turn in rounds but now I laugh and I can almost start writing my epitaph take me back to yesterday where it was still oke let's do not think about tomorrow where I can almost see my grave just take me back to yesterday how long was it away let me run, jump and turn rounds for one more day and then I'm oke reacties welkom (vooral met verbeter punten lol) |
14-12-16 08:46
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arthurwildeboer Berichten: 25 |
ik zou in plaats van 'oke' okay gebruiken, want nu mix je nederlands met engels... verder is het echt een prachtig gedicht! |
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