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From Ochi Etsujin's Spring Days [Háru no NÃchi]:
Translations [白ç‹]
# 1
June perspiration
I'm clearing away the mess,
ain't this a pigsty ?!
å…月ã®æ±—ã¬ãã²å±…る臺ã‹ãªï¼ˆã€Žæ˜¥ã®æ—¥ã€ï¼‰
roku-gatsu no
ase nugu(h)i iru
daï ka na.
[臺ãªã— dainashi = mess]
of-month-6 sweat cleaning/clearing-away I-am the mess ~~
# 2
Lively little bird
door of a shingle-roofed house
ichi-ri mound high.
ã‹ã¤ã“é³¥æ¿å±‹ã®èƒŒæˆ¸ã®ä¸€é‡Œå¡šï¼ˆã€Žæ˜¥ã®æ—¥ã€ï¼‰
katsu kotori itaya no se ko(?>to) no ichi-ri-zuka.
一里塚 [ichi+ri+tsuka] milestone (1 ri apart)
> one ri = nearly 4 kilometers > "4 k. (distance marker) mound"
lively small-bird shingle roofed house's height-door's "4 k. mound"
# 3
Blauweregens slaan
in de wind tegen and're
blauweregens aan.
Wisteria flowers
in the wind just beating other
wisteria flowers . . .
è—¤ã®èŠ±ãŸã‚žã†ã¤ã¶ã„ã¦åˆ¥å“‰ï¼ˆã€Žæ˜¥ã®æ—¥ã€ï¼‰
fuji no hana
tada utsubuite
betsu ka na.
[ã‚ž voiced repetition of ta] [utsu+fuku > f(>b)u-ku > bu-i-te ]
Wisteria flowers just beat-blowing different/another ~~
# 4
Gele bergroosjes
zijn levensgevaarlijk, dus
loop ik eromheen . . .
å±±å¹ã®ã‚ã¶ãªã岨ã®ãã¥ã‚Œå“‰ï¼ˆã€Žæ˜¥ã®æ—¥ã€ï¼‰
yamábuki* no
abúnaki sò nokú-
zùre ka nà .
* literally: "mountain wind"
nokuzuru: noku = step aside + suru = do/make
yellow mountain roselets / are life-threatening,
so I step aside (step-aside- / do), stupid huh ?!
# 5
Evening mist --
I stop to quench my thirst
on a wet white wall.
ã¿ã‹ã¸ã‚Œã°ç™½å£ã„ã‚„ã—夕ãŒã™ã¿ï¼ˆã€Žæ˜¥ã®æ—¥ã€ï¼‰
mika(h)ere-ba
shira-kabe iyashi
yuu gasumi .
when-I-look-back/when-I-forsake-one-thing-for-another(> to stop to)
white-wall quench(-my-thirst) evening haziness
# X
One left I can't make head or tail of:
玉ã¾ã¤ã‚Šæ¡‚ã«ã‚€ã‹ãµå¤•ã‹ãªï¼ˆã€Žæ˜¥ã®æ—¥ã€ï¼‰
tama matsuri
katsura ni mukafu
yuu ka na.
bead/ball/jewel/beautiful -- festival
cinnamon tree [ni] -- . . .
evening, I-wonder-?!
* * *
Source: http://wkdhaikutopics.blogspot.nl/2010/11/ochi-etsujin.html
And many thanks to: http://tangorin.com/
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